Question

12．假如你是林動，想邀請即將來你校進行為期三個月學(xué)習(xí)的英國筆友David到你家來住．根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫一封電子郵件．
寫作要點：
1．表達得知他要來你校學(xué)習(xí)之后你的喜悅之情．
2．介紹你家的情況．
（1）位置：在你的學(xué)校旁邊，附近有公園．
（2）成員：爸爸（喜歡下象棋）、媽媽（擅長做中國食物）和你．
3．對他到來之后如何盡快適應(yīng)（get used to）新的生活提出具體建議．
寫作要求：
1．不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名．
2，可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫．
3．字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰．
4．至少80詞．
Dear David．
How is everything going？I'm very glad to hear that you will come to my school to study for three months．My parents and I all wish you to live with us．My home is near from my school．And there is a park nearby．
In my home，my father likes playing chess．My mother likes cooking Chinese food．It's delicious．I think you will like it．I like playing basketball after school．We can play it in the park．
You can get used to the new life in China quickly if you live with us．You know，it is very important．
I hope to hear from you soon．
                                                    Yours．
                                                    Lin Dong．

Answer 1

分析 本文是想邀請即將來校進行為期三個月學(xué)習(xí)的英國筆友David到家來住的一篇文章，可以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時結(jié)合進行寫作，寫作要點包括：1．表達喜悅之情．2．介紹你家的情況．（在你的學(xué)校旁邊，附近有公園．爸爸喜歡下象棋、媽媽擅長做中國食物和你）．3．如何盡快適應(yīng)新的生活提出具體建議．

解答 I'm very glad to hear that you will come to my school to study for three months．My parents and I all wish you to live
with us．My home is near from my school．And there is a park nearby．
   In my home，my father likes playing chess．My mother likes cooking Chinese food．It's delicious．I think you will like it．I like playing basketball after school．We can play it in the park．
   You can get used to the new life in China quickly if you live with us．You know，it is very important．

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)．寫作時，要注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達流暢．