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【題目】假如你是北京的李麗，下周你在哈爾濱讀中學(xué)的表妹來(lái)北京旅游．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示

給她寫(xiě)一封信，并告訴她在北京旅游期間做一名文明的（well﹣mannered）中學(xué)生．

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1、歡迎她來(lái)北京．

2、介紹北京的情況．

（1）下周天氣：白天最高溫度超過(guò)330C；

（2）交通方式：最好乘坐地鐵；

（3）必去的名勝：長(zhǎng)城．

3、對(duì)她在北京旅游期間如何做一名文明的中學(xué)生提出具體建議．

寫(xiě)作要求：

1、不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名．

2、可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫．

3、字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰．

4、至少80詞．

Dear Li Lan，

How are you doing？

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Li．

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Lan，

How are you doing？Welcome to Beijing．Beijing is located in the east of China and attracts more and more people at home and abroad to visit，study and even lived there for a long time．The reason why beijing is so popular is that it is neither hot in summer nor cold in winter．Not only is it the capital of china，but also it is recognized as the political，educational，and culture center．If you want to have an enjoyable journey，I suggest you climb the great wall．Because the famous saying in China is that the man who does not reach the great wall is not a true man．The weather will be hot next weekends and the highest temperature is above 30 degrees． So you should wear cool clothes．The transportation is very convenient because the subway nearly covers the whole city．So you had better take the subway to go out．

Beijing is a civilized city and you should be a civilized student．Zunlaoaiyou is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation．If you sit next to the old or the sick，please take the initiative seat．

Looking forward to your coming.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Li

【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以來(lái)“北京旅游”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫(xiě)作材料，寫(xiě)一封書(shū)信。介紹北京的情況，以及寫(xiě)出文明旅游的要求。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中Welcome to, the capital of, take the subway, had better, looking forward to，and、so 等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如:句型not only...but also...；賓語(yǔ)從句、條件狀語(yǔ)從句、原因狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。