Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

近日，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部即將舉辦名為“My favourite star”的英文寫(xiě)作比賽。假設(shè)你是郎平的粉絲，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)80左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):1.郎平，你的偶像，五十幾歲，孩童時(shí)就癡迷于打排球;

2.過(guò)去在隊(duì)里擔(dān)任主力(play the lead role)，參加過(guò)很多比賽;

3.因其出色的工作，中國(guó)隊(duì)贏得很多獎(jiǎng);她是中國(guó)人的驕傲;

4.嚴(yán)肅認(rèn)真，總致力于高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，取得了很多成績(jī);

5.你認(rèn)為……(發(fā)揮2―3句)。

My favourite star

Lang Ping is the chief coach of the Chinese National Women's Volleyball Team.

Answer 1

【答案】My favourite star

Lang Ping is the chief coach of the Chinese National Women's Volleyball Team. She is

my hero. She is in her fifties. As a child, she was crazy about playing volleyball. She used to

play the lead role in her team. Site took part in many competitions. Because of her excellent

work, the Chinese team has won many awards. We Chinese people are proud of her. She is

serious and always works to high standards. She has got many achievements. I think she

has devoted herself/all her life to sports. I admire her most. We should learn from her and

work hard.

【解析】

這是一篇提綱式的材料作文，要求以“My favourite star”為標(biāo)題，介紹排球明星郎平，屬于人物介紹。人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意主謂一致。在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。用到的詞組或短語(yǔ)有：in one’s fifties，be crazy about doing sth.，used to do，play the lead role，take part in，be proud of devote oneself to，learn from等。

高分句型一：She ①u(mài)sed to ②play the lead role in her team.她過(guò)去曾經(jīng)在隊(duì)中擔(dān)任主力。

①u(mài)sed to do sth過(guò)去常常做某事。②play the lead role in 在…里面是主力或扮演主要角色。

高分句型二：I think①she has②devoted herself/all her life to sports.我認(rèn)為她已經(jīng)把自己的一生都投入到了體育運(yùn)動(dòng)中去了。①I think 后引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，引導(dǎo)詞that被省略。②devote oneself/all one's life to sth固定短語(yǔ)，后可跟名詞，代詞或動(dòng)名詞，指“把自己或一生都奉獻(xiàn)給……”。