Question

【題目】書面表達
某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。請根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。

過去	生活條件差，道路狹窄，房屋破舊。污染嚴重，垃圾遍地。
現(xiàn)在	生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人有自己的汽車；新的飛機場投入使用；環(huán)境變得更漂亮了；生活舒適。 旅游：每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客。
將來	希望……（兩點）

要求：①語句通順，書寫整潔。
②不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和班級。
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small,……

Answer 1

【答案】The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
【解析】考查提綱類作文的寫作。話題是家鄉(xiāng)的變化，要點是以表格形式表示的，結(jié)構很清晰，分三部分，一部分是過去情況，一部分是現(xiàn)在情況，第三部分是將來展望，可以適當增加細節(jié)，不能只是把要點翻譯成英語、，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。范文中的復雜句不對但使用了一些短語：In the past ，take place ，live a better life另外還要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。如In the past ，Now等