Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）

現(xiàn)在玩電腦游戲是個(gè)很普遍的愛(ài)好，特別在青少年中。然而，不同的人對(duì)此持不同看法。

支持	反對(duì)
1、讓打字更快 2、使同朋友和家人的關(guān)系更好	1、在電腦屏幕前太長(zhǎng)時(shí)間加重近視、帶來(lái)頭痛等健康問(wèn)題 2、花過(guò)多時(shí)間玩電腦游戲可能會(huì)使學(xué)習(xí)更糟糕

請(qǐng)表述以上不同的看法，并說(shuō)說(shuō)你的觀點(diǎn)。

要求： 1、80詞左右。

2、表達(dá)清楚, 語(yǔ)句通順, 意思連貫, 書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范.

3、開(kāi)頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Tips：打字type 與…的 關(guān)系the relationship with…

近視的nearsighted 頭痛headache

Nowadays playing computer games is a very common hobby, especially among teenagers. However, different people have different opinions about playing computer games. ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack,

Nowadays playing computer games is a very common hobby, especially among teenagers. However, different people have different opinions about playing computer games.

Some people think playing computer games can help them type faster. In addition, it can make your relationship with your friends and family members better and closer.

Others think playing computer games too much can lead to some problems. Firstly, spending long time in front of the computer screen will bring health problems, for example, it will make you more near-sighted and bring you headache. Secondly, spending too much time in playing computer games may make your grades lower/worse.

In my opinion, as students, we shouldn’t play computer games too much. It’s bad for us. We should try to control ourselves.

【解析】

試題分析：本題考查開(kāi)放性作文，難度較大。完全需要考生自己梳理要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)也給了考生較大的發(fā)揮空間，可以讓考生靈活運(yùn)用自己所掌握的語(yǔ)法和詞匯知識(shí)。可以一分為二的看待，既要看到網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲好的一面，可以讓人得到放松，但是看到其不好的一面，讓學(xué)生荒廢了學(xué)業(yè)等。重點(diǎn)在于其不好的一面，要做重點(diǎn)說(shuō)明。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提高文章的層次。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。這些句型it can make your relationship with your friends and family members better and closerit will make you more near-sighted and bring you headache.的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。