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11．近年來(lái)，中小學(xué)生健康問(wèn)題日益引起人們的關(guān)注．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)就該問(wèn)題談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />要求：（1）內(nèi)容包括 ①列舉中小學(xué)生面臨的健康問(wèn)題．
②請(qǐng)談?wù)勗鯓硬拍鼙３纸】担?br />（2）字?jǐn)?shù)：60-80詞．
（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名．All of us want to be healthy．But most students in China have trouble keeping fit these years．Some students don't have enough time to sleep．Some don't have a healthy diet．A lot of students are too busy to do sports．They always have too much homework to do．
What should we do to keep healthy？Firstly，I think we need about eight hours'sleep every day．Secondly，we should learn to relax．We can do sports every day，such as running and playing ball games．Thirdly，we should eat more vegetables，fruits and less fast food．Of course，there are also some other good ways to keep healthy．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是就中小學(xué)生健康問(wèn)題日益引起人們的關(guān)注這個(gè)問(wèn)題談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑢懽鲀?nèi)容要包括：列舉中小學(xué)生面臨的健康問(wèn)題；談?wù)勗鯓硬拍鼙３纸】担�由于是介紹當(dāng)今的現(xiàn)象，故時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，介紹中小學(xué)生面臨的健康問(wèn)題時(shí)，人稱用第三人稱，談自己的看法時(shí)，用第一人稱來(lái)寫．

解答 All of us want to be healthy．But most students in China have trouble keeping fit these years．Some students don't have enough time to sleep．Some don't have a healthy diet．A lot of students are too busy to do sports．They always have too much homework to do．
    What should we do to keep healthy？Firstly，I think we need about eight hours'sleep every day．Secondly，we should learn to relax．We can do sports every day，such as running and playing ball games．Thirdly，we should eat more vegetables，fruits and less fast food．Of course，there are also some other good ways to keep healthy．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，首先要注意審清主題，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．其次要注意行文間簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句，用熟悉的句子來(lái)表達(dá)．這里給大家提供一些例句和短語(yǔ)，以供參考．
短語(yǔ)：
have trouble doing  很麻煩做某事
have enough time  to do  有足夠的時(shí)間做某事
a healthy/balance diet   健康/均衡的飲食
eight hours'sleep 八個(gè)小時(shí)的睡眠
try one's best to do 盡某人最大努力做某事
too…to…太…而不能…
句型：
A lot of students are too busy to do sports． 很多學(xué)生太忙了而沒(méi)有時(shí)間參加體育活動(dòng)．
I think we need about eight hours'sleep every day．我認(rèn)為我們每天需要八小時(shí)的睡眠．
We should eat more vegetables，fruits and less fast food．我們應(yīng)該多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃快餐．