Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（本大題共10分）

假設(shè)你發(fā)現(xiàn)同學(xué)間有抄作業(yè)現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇題為“Stop copying others' homework．please”的短文刊登在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)輔導(dǎo)報(bào)上。

注意：1．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫。

2．詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Stop copying others' homework， please

Every day some of my classmates like copying others' homework.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Stop copying others' homework， please

Every day some of my classmates like copying others' homework. Some students find there is too much homework and it is a bit difficult. Others spend too much time playing computer games and chatting on the Internet. As a result， they often fail the exams and some even lose interest in study.

I think it is helpful for us to make a list of the things we need to do. We should study hard instead of playing computer games. And we can also ask our teachers for advice if we meet problems.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息，寫出原因，結(jié)果，建議。我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫作時(shí)，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。而且所使用的詞匯和句型，是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時(shí)的積累發(fā)揮出來(lái)就可以。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求寫作，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。而且作者在寫作時(shí)，將這些信息進(jìn)行了整合，讓意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達(dá)，這一點(diǎn)很好。短文中的語(yǔ)言合乎英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的句式，增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。如賓語(yǔ)從句there is too much homework and it is a bit difficult。 it is helpful for us to make a list of the things。if we meet problems.定語(yǔ)從句we need to do.介詞短語(yǔ)instead of playing computer games.句式：Somebody spend time doing. As a result.