Question

11．假設(shè)你是May，你的筆友Abby來信向你傾訴她的煩惱，請根據(jù)Abby的來信給出你的建議，寫一封70詞左右的回信．
Dear May，
How do you feel these days？I'm very sad because my mother always asks me to take the piano lessons after school．But I would like to spend my free time playing football with my team players．What should I do？Can you give me some advice？
Abby
（參考詞匯：greeting問候  communicate交流   hobby愛好  understand理解 possible可能的）
Dear Abby，
Everything is all right with me．Thanks for your greeting．According to your email，I think the key problem is that you need to communicate with your mother．First，you can tell her what your hobby is．Then，you should understand her sometimes because what she said is good for you．And as for me，I would like to say that if possible，you can make a good plan to do both of them．You can spend half of the free time playing football with your team players and then the piano lessons．I believe if you do like this，your mother will be happy and you can get on well with her．
May．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think①the key problem is②that you need to communicate with your mother我認(rèn)為主要問題是你需要和你的媽媽交流．
①think后是省略that的賓語從句．
②that引導(dǎo)的表語從句，與is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
【高分句型二】
you should understand her sometimes①because②what she said is good for you．有時(shí)候你應(yīng)該理解她因?yàn)樗�說的對你有好處．
①because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
②what she said 是主語從句．

解答 Dear Abby，
    Everything is all right with me．Thanks for your greeting．According to your email，I think the key problem is that you need to communicate with your mother．【高分句型一】（分析問題）．First，you can tell her what your hobby is．Then，you should understand her sometimes because what she said is good for you．【高分句型二】And as for me，I would like to say that if possible，you can make a good plan to do both of them．You can spend half of the free time playing football with your team players and then the piano lessons（建議）．I believe if you do like this，your mother will be happy and you can get on well with her．
  May

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