Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1小題，滿分15分）

中秋節(jié)和國慶節(jié)剛剛結(jié)束，假如你是李華，你的筆友Tony剛從美國發(fā)來的電子郵件，信中詢問面對初三的緊張學(xué)習(xí)，你是如何在節(jié)假日好好放松自己的？你認(rèn)為最好的放松方式是什么？另外，Tony對中國的中秋節(jié)很感興趣，想了解關(guān)于這方面的一些情況。請回信告知。

要點(diǎn)提示：1．鍛煉身體；讀好書 ；去旅游觀光；當(dāng)一名志愿者；幫助父母(任選3個(gè))；

2、介紹有關(guān)中秋節(jié)的情況。

要求：（1）郵件必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

（2）郵件中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

（3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右。

參考詞匯： relax myself, the best way, the lunar calendar(陰歷), The symbol of reunion(團(tuán)圓的象征)

Hi, Tony,

Good to hear from you! I’m relaxed after

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Bye for now,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

Good to hear from you! I’m relaxed after spending National Day and the Mid-autumn Festival. During these holidays, I had a good rest to relax myself. First I did sports as usual and learned to play table tennis. It's good for my health. And I read a great book to improve myself. At the same time, I had a trip to Xianghu .The sky there was so blue and the air there was so clean that I fell in love with it. Because of it ,I think the best way to relax myself is to go out-seeing . How do you usually relax yourself in your spare time? Can you tell me next time?

Also, I spent the Mid-Autumn Festival with my family on August 15th of the lunar calendar. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together for a big dinner that day. We usually eat moon cakes while enjoying the moon at night. We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion.

Bye for now,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如The sky there was so blue and the air there was so clean that I fell in love with it. Because of it ,I think the best way to relax myself is to go out-seeing .等等。