Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)(共16分)

假如你是李明，你的朋友Peter即將面臨中考，然而他卻深感壓力巨大，寢食不安，情緒低落，學(xué)習(xí)效率低下。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封信給他提一些有益的建議，幫助他調(diào)整心態(tài)，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，輕松迎考。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 學(xué)會(huì)放松（體育鍛煉，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)… 2.健康飲食 3.充足睡眠 4. ……

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右。（文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

2. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但必須包含以上要點(diǎn)。

Dear Peter，

Don’t worry about your study too much. First， you should

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter，

Don't worry about your study too much.First，you should learn how to relax yourself.I think doing more sports is good for your health.Listening to music is also a good way to relax.And I think it's necessary to have healthy eating habits.Please remember to have breakfast every morning.It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning.You'd better go to bed early and have enough sleep.It will keep you active during the day.Finally I think you should talk with your friends，parents or teachers often.Tell them about your thoughts and feelings.Try to get help from them. I hope you can stay in good spirits，and study better.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如I think doing more sports is good for your health.Listening to music is also a good way to relax.等，Finally等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。