Question

同學(xué)們，你們喜歡看Jackie Chan的電影嗎?請(qǐng)根據(jù)提供的信息以My favourite actor Jackie Chan 為題寫一篇作文，文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

Personal details
Date of birth	7th April 1954
Place of birth	Hong Kong
Characters	humorous, never give up easily
Problems	not enough time for his family, feel tired
Award	Golden Horse Award for Best Actor (1993)
Dreams
Moving to Mars	no pollution, more space, …
Owning a robot	wash the dishes, cook meals, …
Wishes
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要求：1. 包含表格提供的全部信息并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；    
2. 條理清楚、符合邏輯，90詞左右。
My favourite actor Jackie Chan
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Answer 1

My favorite actor Jackie Chan
My favorite actor is Jackie chan. He was born in Hong Kong on 7th April 1954. He has a big nose and putting on grand AIRS eyes. He has no outstanding appearance, but had a kind heart and friendly smile. He works hard and never gives up. But he has no enough time for his family and always feels tired. In 1993, he was given the Golden Horse Award for Best Actor. He wishes to go to the Mars one day, because it is a place which has no pollution and has more space. He also wishes to have a robot to help him to wash the dishes and cook meals.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己最喜歡的影星成龍。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: be born in出生在……；give up放棄；連詞but但是等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。