Question

10．某英語教育網(wǎng)站正在開展主題為"How can a teenager have a successful life？"的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）．請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)．

同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)	你的觀點(diǎn)
l  努力學(xué)習(xí) l  尊重父母 l  服務(wù)社會(huì) l  計(jì)劃未來	…（至少兩條）

注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；
（3）詞數(shù)：80-100；
（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：尊重respect
短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other我們需要交一些好朋友那樣我們能彼此學(xué)習(xí)．
so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it's important to a successful life我們必須活躍，更多的鍛煉去保持健康因?yàn)閷?duì)于一個(gè)成功的人生是重要的．
because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life．
Most students believe it's necessary to study hard．After all，study plays a key role in their life．They also agree they should respect their parents，who look after them every day．Besides，they're ready to serve the society and in their opinion it's really meaningful．What's more，they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future．（同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)）
From my point of view，we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other【高分句型一】．Also，we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it's important to a successful life．【高分句型二】（你的觀點(diǎn)）

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