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3．如今，中學(xué)生的假期生活發(fā)生了很大的變化．假如你是李明，你的新筆友Alan想了解你在即將到來的暑假中的生活．請你根據(jù)以下提示和要求，給他寫一封信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．自我介紹；=2．學(xué)習(xí)情況和休閑方式；
3．適當(dāng)上網(wǎng)和鍛煉；=4．幫忙做家務(wù)，參加社會活動．
注意：1．條理清楚，字跡工整，詞數(shù)80詞左右，圍繞主題可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和地名．
參考詞匯：go for a trip；take exercise；surf the Internet；social activities．
Dear Alan，
I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．My name is Li Ming．I'm a student in the Middle School．I will tell you something about my holiday．
Our holiday life has changed a lot．Learning and relaxing are still very important to us．Besides，I surf on the Internet three times a week，and I do some exercise every morning．I often help our parents do housework or farm work．Through that，we realize how hard our parents work every day．And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time．Also，we take an active part in social activities as volunteers．Sometimes，we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children．We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．We find great pleasure in all these activities．
Best wishes!
Please write to me soon．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是假如你是李明，你的新筆友Alan想了解你在即將到來的暑假中的生活．請你根據(jù)以下提示和要求，給他寫一封信，也就是說，本文要以第一人稱來寫，寫作內(nèi)容要包括：1．自我介紹；2．學(xué)習(xí)情況和休閑方式；3．適當(dāng)上網(wǎng)和鍛煉；4．幫忙做家務(wù)，參加社會活動．還要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，只要不脫離主題即可．

解答 Dear Alan，
I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．My name is Li Ming．I'm a student in the Middle School．I will tell you something
about my holiday．
Our holiday life has changed a lot．Learning and relaxing are still very important to us．Besides，I surf on the Internet
three times a week，and I do some exercise every morning．I often help our parents do housework or farm work．Through that，we
realize how hard our parents work every day．And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time．Also，we take an active
part in social activities as volunteers．Sometimes，we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children．We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful．We find great pleasure in all these activities．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming

點評 本文是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，寫作時要注意必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點，且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，千萬不能做成翻譯題．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句，以使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．