Question

許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會使人產(chǎn)生壓力，為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題，你們班特意開展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”為主題的英語演講比賽，請你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法，與同學(xué)分享，內(nèi)容包括：

●同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么；

●我的壓力是什么；

●我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。

注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；

      2. 詞數(shù)80~100詞；

      3. 短文的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

      4. 將答案寫在相應(yīng)的位置上。

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. __________________________________________________________

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That’s all. Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

                            Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.

Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。同時針對個人的真實情況與短文的要求進(jìn)行恰當(dāng)?shù)氖潞�，更能加強作品的可讀性。

【亮點說明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。

考點：提綱作文。