Question

11．假如你是林思，要去澳大利亞的Melbourne High留學(xué)，需要在當(dāng)?shù)卣乙粋�(gè)寄宿家庭（host family）．請(qǐng)按要求寫一封約100詞的電子郵件給寄宿家庭中介公司的經(jīng)理Mr．Porter．
內(nèi)容包括：（1）簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己的個(gè)人情況，如語(yǔ)言，愛(ài)好等
（2）提出自己的對(duì)寄宿家庭的要求（如下表所示）

Family member	English speaker，no smoker
Housing	Near the school，a bedroom with a bathroom
Others	Cooking by myself…

注意：郵件需涵蓋以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞匯）；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息．
Dear Mr Porter，
My name is Li Si，I'm a sixteen-year-old boy from China．I'm going to study in Melbourne High．
I like making friends．English is my favorite subject but I'm weak in spoken English．That's why I want to find a host family who are native English speakers．In this way，I will have more chances to practice English in daily life．I hope it's a family without smokers．Moreover，it's better if the family lives within a twenty-minute walk from my school and provides a bedroom with a bathroom．As for the meals，I'd like to cook by myself because I'm fond of cooking．
Look forward to your early reply．
Best wishes，
Lin Si．

Answer 1

分析 本題是根據(jù)要求寫給寄宿家庭中介公司的經(jīng)理，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己的情況，并提出自己對(duì)寄宿家庭的要求，內(nèi)容要結(jié)合圖表所示，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．寫作時(shí)，要注意要點(diǎn)齊全，句式簡(jiǎn)單．

解答 Dear Mr．Porter，
    My name is Lin Si．I'm a sixteen-year-old boy from China．I'm going to study in Melbourne High．
    I like making friends．English is my favorite subject but I'm weak in spoken English．That's why I want to find a host family who are native English speakers．In this way，I will have more chances to practice English in daily life．I hope it's a family without smokers．Moreover，it's better if the family lives within a twenty-minute walk from my school and provides a bedroom with a bathroom．As for the meals，I'd like to cook by myself because I'm fond of cooking．
     Look forward to your early reply．
Best wishes，
Lin Si

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，顯得簡(jiǎn)潔明了，正被越來(lái)越多的各級(jí)各類英語(yǔ)考試所采用．提綱圖表式作文屬于控制性寫作的范疇．它控制性強(qiáng)，便于評(píng)分．考生應(yīng)仔細(xì)分析圖表，引證典型數(shù)據(jù)并按提綱要求進(jìn)行取材與構(gòu)思．本題在提要求時(shí)，盡量要用委婉的語(yǔ)氣．