Question

7．在過去的三年初中生活中，你肯定遇到了很多好老師，言愛學(xué)校英語廣播電臺(tái)開展了"I love you，my English teacher"英語征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，寫一封英語廣播稿．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．中等身高，戴眼鏡，性格外向，善于交流；喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，經(jīng)常和同學(xué)們打籃球；
2．愛工作，嚴(yán)格對(duì)待和關(guān)愛每一個(gè)學(xué)生，幫助家庭有困難的學(xué)生；
3．課堂有趣充滿活力，經(jīng)常開展豐富多彩活動(dòng)；課后幫助學(xué)困生，同學(xué)英語成績好．
參考詞匯：medium；outgoing；communicate；strict；care about；in trouble；colorful；Thanks to
寫作要求：
1．詞數(shù)80-100（短文的開始和結(jié)束語已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
2．內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名．
I love you，my English teacherI have met many good teachers in the last three years．My English teacher，Mr．Huang is one of them．Now let me tell you something about him．       ．
I love you，my English teacher!I will never forget you forever!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
He①is good at②communicating with others ③because he is outgoing．他善于與人溝通，因?yàn)樗�很外向�?br />①be good at擅長…后跟名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞
②communicate with sb與某人交流
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句
高分句型二：
His class is①so funny and exciting that all of us②fall in love with English．他的課是如此有趣和令人興奮，我們都愛上了英語．
①so…that如此，以至于，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句；so后跟形容詞或副詞．
②fall in love with 愛上…

解答 I love you，my English teacherI have met many good teachers in the last three years．My English teacher，Mr．Huang is one of them．Now let me tell you something about him．Mr．Huang is of medium height and a little thin．He wears a pair of glasses．He is good at communicating with others because he is outgoing．【高分句型一】He likes sports．You can see him play basketball with us students after class．【對(duì)老師的外貌，性格及愛好介紹】
Mr．Huang enjoys his work．And he is a strict but caring teacher．He is very strict with us but cares about every student．When the students from poor families are in trouble，he is always ready to help them．【愛工作，嚴(yán)格對(duì)待和關(guān)愛每一個(gè)學(xué)生，幫助家庭有困難的學(xué)生】
I like my English teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively and active．In his class，we often have different kinds of activities such as reading．competition and discussion．His class is so funny and exciting that all of us fall in love with English．【高分句型二】After class，he usually helps the students who have difficulties in learning English．Thanks to his hard work，we have improved our English a lot．【課堂有趣充滿活力，經(jīng)常開展豐富多彩活動(dòng)；課后幫助學(xué)困生，同學(xué)英語成績好】
I love you，my English teacher!I will never forget you forever!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．