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8．你校開展"How to Deal with the Exam Stress"征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中提示的內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文．

適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?/TD>	•積極思考，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)； •及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，防止遺忘；
過重的壓力	•無法入睡，非常疲倦； •害怕考試，導(dǎo)致失�。�
應(yīng)對(duì)的措施	•合理計(jì)劃，準(zhǔn)備充分； •…（至少兩條）

要求：1．用上所給要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；
2．詞數(shù)80左右，短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名．
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．
However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．
In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以How to Deal with the Exam Stress為題介紹如何解決考試帶來的壓力．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫Γ?#8226;積極思考，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)；•及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，防止遺忘；
2．過重的壓力；•無法入睡，非常疲倦；•害怕考試，導(dǎo)致失�。�
3．應(yīng)對(duì)的措施；合理計(jì)劃，準(zhǔn)備充分…

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事
in the end 最終
deal with 處理
had better do sth 最好做某事
such as 例如
do well in擅長
【高分句型】
1．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來時(shí)
2．Besides it can①remind us to review our lessons in time ②to remember them．
①remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事，in time 及時(shí)
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．
3．①In my opinion，②to deal with stress，③we'd better plan and prepare well．
①in my opinion 依我看來，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)．
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．
③had better do sth 最好做某事

解答 How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．【高分句型】Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．【高分句型】So we can pass the exams easily．（適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫�；積極思考，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)；及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，防止遺忘）
However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．（過重的壓力；無法入睡，非常疲倦；害怕考試，導(dǎo)致失敗）
In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well【高分句型】．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams．（應(yīng)對(duì)的措施；合理計(jì)劃，準(zhǔn)備充分；養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，介紹如何解決考試帶來的壓力．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：A little bit of stress can be…；it can remind us to…；if we have…及we'd better…等句式的應(yīng)用．寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用．寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要用題目要求的提綱內(nèi)容．