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【題目】學(xué)校將在下周舉行英文演講比賽，Jack的話題是 “對我影響最深的人”，請根據(jù)以下材料，幫他組織一篇90字左右英文演講稿，介紹一下三位對他影響最深的人。

Persons	Details
My father	1. 40多歲，充滿愛心 2. 令我驚訝的是，他已決定去世后捐贈遺體供醫(yī)學(xué)研究
Tan Dun	1. 1958年出生在湖南省中部地區(qū)，從小對音樂很感興趣 2. 成功地把中西方音樂融合在一起
Jackie Chan	1.已參演了近100部影片，獲得了許多獎項(xiàng) 2. 多年從事慈善工作（具體表現(xiàn)用1到2句話說明） 3. 被公認(rèn)為是一位超級明星，受到人們高度贊揚(yáng)

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

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They are all my heroes. From now on , I will learn from them.

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【答案】The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

My father is in his forties. He has a heart full of love. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.

Tan Dun was born in central Hunan, China. When he was very young, Tan Showed an interest in Music. He has successfully brought Chinese and Western music together.

Jackie Chan has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. He has spent many years doing charity work.He often donates much money to help poor people. He is considered as a super star and is thought highly of by many people.

They are all my heroes. From now on, I will learn from them.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，本文是一篇演講介紹對我影響最深的人。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am happy to……；They are……；My father is……；Jackie Chan has acted…….；等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.