Question

 課堂上老師給我們講了希望工程的一些事情。她說中國(guó)有些貧困地區(qū)的孩子由于家庭太貧窮了，所以他們不能上學(xué)。老師號(hào)召我們?nèi)�幫助這些孩子。我深受打動(dòng)，決定為他們做些力所能及的事。要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)齊全；

        2.自己能為那些貧困學(xué)生所做的事情不少于兩點(diǎn)；提示詞：Project，Hope,poor,call on 

題型分析：此次寫作要使用第一人稱來行文。在陳述老師描述的內(nèi)容時(shí)要用一般過去時(shí)；在表達(dá)自己想為貧困地區(qū)的孩子做的事情時(shí)用一般將來時(shí)。

行文思路：此次寫作可以分三部分來寫：第一，陳述老師所說內(nèi)容；第二，列舉自己所能做的事（如捐零花錢，捐學(xué)習(xí)用品和衣服）；第三，表達(dá)自己的愿望。

高分點(diǎn)撥：在行文過程中，盡量多使用較高級(jí)句式，如賓語從句，狀語從句等。在行文結(jié)束時(shí)表達(dá)一下自己的愿望會(huì)使文章更完整。

佳作展示：

Answer 1

 In English class, our teacher told us something about Project Hope. She said some poor families in some poor areas of China were too poor to send their children to school. She called on us to help them.

I am moved deeply by this. So I decide to help the children in need. First, I will save my pocket money, and send it to Project Hope to help the children. Second, I plan to collect my classmates' school things and clothes and send them to the students in need.

  I hope they can get a better education with the help of all the warm-hearted people.