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【題目】假設(shè)你叫李林，你們班級要選拔新班長，你想向班主任胡老師推薦張平。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一封100詞左右的推薦信給胡老師。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

姓名	張平
個性	1).自信，不害怕在許多人面前演講； 2).勤奮，從不介意為班級做額外的工作； 3).有條理，從不忘記需要做的事。
喜好	1).最喜歡藍(lán)色，因為……; 2).愛好音樂，因為……; 3). ……。
愿望	希望世界上沒有戰(zhàn)爭，所有人過幸福生活。

Dear Mr Hu,
I'm writing to recommend Zhang Ping as our new monitor. I think he has some strong qualities for this position.
I think Zhang Ping is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lin

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr Hu,

I'm writing to recommend Zhang Ping as our new monitor. I think he has some strong qualities for this position.

Zhang Ping is confident. He is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people. He is hard-working. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He is organized and never forgets the things he needs to do.

His favourite color is blue because blue represents calm and it is good fo rmind and body. He likes music because music can make people feel relaxed. He also likes jogging because it's good for his health.

He loves peace and he hopes there is no war in the world and everyone can enjoy a happy life.

I think Zhang Ping is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Lin

【解析】本文是一封推薦信，在信中要敘述推薦這個人的原因，敘述張平平時的表現(xiàn)及愛好，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，句子的主語用第三人稱單數(shù)，要注意不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法，使用自己熟悉的句式及詞匯。要注意上下文的銜接。在寫作中，首先，要根據(jù)試題里的“提示”確定一個寫作中心，再根據(jù)這個中心，列出寫作提綱，提綱一定要包含所提供的情景要點，同時要盡量使用自己熟悉的詞匯與句型。然后，用自己熟悉的詞匯與句型擴展成篇。自己不熟悉的詞匯與句型能換則換，一定不要用，以免用錯扣分。擴展的內(nèi)容一定要緊扣主題。千萬不要寫那些與主題無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。擴展時要注意短文的字?jǐn)?shù)，要寫夠要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，文章要用一般現(xiàn)在時。用第三人稱。以避免由于字?jǐn)?shù)不夠引起的扣分。也不要擴展得太多，字?jǐn)?shù)達到要求既可，以免浪費時間或出現(xiàn)更多的錯誤而扣分。文章要符合邏輯，注意語句連貫性。