Question

17．A．話題作文："最美女教師"張麗莉的事跡感動著我們，同時激勵著我們以她為榜樣，從身邊小事做起，爭做一名合格的中學生．請以此為話題，參考以下提示寫一篇短文．
提示：愛護自己，養(yǎng)成良好的習慣；關心他人（父母、同學、老人、兒童及無家可歸的人），與人和睦相處；參加社會活動，爭做一名志愿者等等．
B．圖示作文：請根據圖片內容寫一篇文章．
 
 提示詞：monk和尚    temple寺廟    search the Internet上網    order water訂水
作文要求：1、話題作文或圖示作文任選其一．
              2、要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當發(fā)揮．
              3、詞數(shù)80--100
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Answer 1

分析 A部分的題目是一篇提綱作文，要求是："最美女教師"張麗莉的事跡感動著我們，同時激勵著我們以她為榜樣，從身邊小事做起，爭做一名合格的中學生．請以此為話題，參考以下提示寫一篇短文．因此人稱應該是第一人稱we，寫作內容應該包括：愛護自己，養(yǎng)成良好的習慣；關心他人（父母、同學、老人、兒童及無家可歸的人），與人和睦相處；參加社會活動，爭做一名志愿者等等，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，并且應該用到can，should等情態(tài)動詞來表達應該做某事．
B部分的題目是一篇圖畫作文，與大家熟知的三個和尚沒水喝的故事接近，不過結局成了在網上訂水，皆大歡喜．描寫這個故事的時候應該用一般過去時，人稱以第三人稱來寫．

解答 A．
   Mrs．Zhang's story moved us．We must learn from her．We should try to be a good student．First we should learn to take good care of ourselves，and start good habits of life and study．Second we should be glad to help others．We are supposed to do what we can to help our parents and classmates with housework and schoolwork．Third we should take an active part in social activities．For example，we can clean up the city parks，pick up rubbish，go to the hospital to help the sick and cheer them up，raise money for charity and so on．
    In a word，we should try our best to help the people in need，and make us more perfect and get more pleasure from it．
B．
    Years ago，there was only one monk in the temple．Every day，he carried water himself．Later，another monk came．They carried water together．Before long a third monk arrived．Now none of them carried water．They all sat on the ground and felt very thirsty．Suddenly，one of them came up with a good idea．He searched the Internet and ordered some water．Soon a worker sent water to the temple．All of the monks were very happy．

點評 書面表達題，主要有"提綱作文"、"圖表作文"、"看圖寫話等形式，主要考查學生運用已學的語言基礎知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準確表達客觀事實，闡述個人觀點，進行思想交流的書面表達能力．像A篇作文，主要考查了闡述個人觀點的能力，B篇則考查了運用所給或所學的詞語，運用熟悉的句型，作適當展開，聯(lián)想，完整表達出畫面的意思的能力．同時為了提高書面表達水平，平時應加強閱讀，應背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．