Question

20．下面是大明寫給他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的煩惱．請你以他的朋友Tom的身份，給他寫一封80詞左右的回信，在信中指出他的問題并給他提出建議．信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
My classmate，Lucy，bought a new pen．I liked it very much，so I used it without her permission．Unluckily，I broke it．Then I put it back secretly．Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me．I don't know what to do．Can you help me？
Yours，
Daming
Dear Daming，
I know your problem．You've made two mistakes．First，you used your classmate's pen withouther permission．Second，when you broke the pen，you didn't tell her the truth．Yes，you must tell her immediately．If you tell her the truth，perhaps she'll beangry with you，but at least you'll prove you are honest．
Then I thinkyou should offer to pay．You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen forher．She will realize that you're truly sorry．
I hope theadvice can help you．I'm sure you will make up with her soon．
Yours，
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①If you tell her the truth，perhaps she'll ②be angry with you，but ③at least you'll prove④you are honest．如果你告訴她真相，也許她會生你的氣，但至少你將證明你是誠實的．
①if引導的條件狀語從句，時態(tài)遵循主將從現(xiàn)．
②be angry with sb對某人生氣
③at least 至少
④prove后為賓語從句，省略了引導詞that
高分句型二：
I'm sure①you will ②make up with her soon．我相信你很快就會和她和好．
①I'm sure后跟賓語從句，連接詞that被省略．
②make up with sb 與某人和好

解答 One possible version：
Dear Daming，
I know your problem．You've made two mistakes．First，you used your classmate's pen without her permission．Second，when you broke the pen，you didn't tell her the truth．【指出大明的問題】Yes，you must tell her immediately．If you tell her the truth，perhaps she'll be angry with you，but at least you'll prove you are honest．【高分句型一】
Then I think you should offer to pay．You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen forher．She will realize that you're truly sorry．【給大明提出建議】
I hope the advice can help you．I'm sure you will make up with her soon．【高分句型二】【我的希望】
Yours，
Tom．

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