Question

 今年的4月22日是第46個世界地球日，節(jié)約資源，減少碳排放量，保護我們的地球是當前最重要的事。請寫一篇80詞左右的短文，倡議你的同學從小事做起，加入低碳生活一族。要求包括以下要點：

1. 節(jié)約用水、用電、用紙；

2. 去超巿購物自備購物袋；

3. 不要購買不必要的東西；

4. 不要購買一次性餐具；

5. 步行或騎自行車上學。要求：1.語句通順，內容表述完整；

2. 首句已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)；

3. 可適當發(fā)揮。

提示詞：the amount of (............. 的數(shù)量).one-off(一次性的）

題型分析：此次寫作是以第一人稱，使用一般現(xiàn)在時來倡議同學們過一種低碳環(huán)保的生活以保護我們的環(huán)境。

行文思路：根據所給提示，為了節(jié)約資源、減少碳排放、保護我們的地球，"我" 可以倡議同學們從題目中要求的幾件小事做起：減少我們日常生活中水、電、紙的使用(reduce the amount of water ...);自備購物袋(take our own bags );不買不必要的東西(not buy fewer things that are unnecessary );不購買、不使用一次性餐具(buy or use one-off cups ...);步行上學(walk to school);最后發(fā)出號召（Let，s...).

高分點撥：此次寫作行文過程中注意句子之間的銜接，不可逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮。在提出建議時可以使用had better，should，shouldn't等情態(tài)動詞。行文中定語從句的使用可以增加得分亮點。

佳作展示：

With global warming getting worse, more and more people choose to live a low-carbon life
in order to reduce greenhouse gases.      

Answer 1

 With global warming getting worse,more and more people choose to live a low-carbon life in order to reduce greenhouse gases.

  We'd better reduce the amount of water,paper and electricity we use. It's important to turn off the lights and computers when we leave the room. We should take our own bags when we go shopping instead of using plastic bags from supermarkets. We'd better not buy things that are unnecessary. We shouldn't buy or use one-off cups,chopsticks or bowls. It's good for us to walk or ride bikes to school instead of taking cars. We can also plant more trees to make our environment more beautiful.

  Let's take action and live a low-carbon life.