Question

5．根據(jù)下列圖畫，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文，要求敘述完整．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖畫說說同學(xué)們一起度過的一天．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
描述圖畫；同學(xué)們討論怎過周六，決定去爬山，野餐，打掃衛(wèi)生把垃圾扔垃圾桶里

 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
advise doing sth 建議做某事
decide to do sth 決定去做某事
pick up 撿起
have fun 玩的開心
【高分句型】
1．Last Friday we had a discussion on what to do on Saturday．
疑問詞+to do結(jié)構(gòu) 作為on 的賓語．
2．①As is known to us all，②it's everyone's duty to protect the environment．
①As is known to us all正如我們所知道的
②it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
3．Although we were all tired，we were very happy
aithough雖然，引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，不能和but連用．

解答 Last Friday we had a discussion on what to do on Saturday．【高分句型】Different people have different opinions．Some advised going to Children's Palace to have fun，others suggested going boating in the beautiful park．（第一幅圖）Finally we decided to to go climbing and have a picnic in the open air．We started early on Saturday morning and reached the top of the mountain．（第二幅圖）We had a picnic and talked happily．（第三幅圖）After that we picked up the rubbish and threw it into the dustbin．（第四幅圖）As is known to us all，it's everyone's duty to protect the environment．【高分句型】Although we were all tired，we were very happy．【高分句型】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生正確描述圖片，根據(jù)圖片發(fā)揮自己的想象，準(zhǔn)確描述．在寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)記述事情，運(yùn)用詞組和豐富的句型．同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．
本文行文流暢，語言運(yùn)用嫻熟．恰當(dāng)使用了一般過去時(shí)，并且能熟練運(yùn)用連詞或過渡詞：although，finally，after that．同時(shí)，能夠根據(jù)圖片，準(zhǔn)確地運(yùn)用詞組進(jìn)行表達(dá)．