Question

12．初中生活即將結(jié)束，豐富多彩的學(xué)校活動(dòng)一定給你留下了許多美好的回憶．根據(jù)圖表提示，選擇一次你最喜歡的活動(dòng)進(jìn)行描述．

內(nèi)容包括：1）此次活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；
2）你的收獲或感受．
要求：1）詞數(shù)：80-100．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名．
My junior school life is coming to an end．I had a lot of sweet memories．      ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖表提示，選擇一次你最喜歡的活動(dòng)進(jìn)行描述并談?wù)勛约旱母惺埽畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一、三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1）最喜歡的活動(dòng)是什么
2）此次活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；
3）你的收獲或感受．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
share with sb…與某人分享…
concentrate on sth 專(zhuān)注于…
encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
cheer up 使興奮
with the help of sb 在某人的幫助下
make efforts 努力
for the first time第一次
【高分句型】
1．①When thinking of losing of the center，we were all down and couldn't ②concentrate on the next match．
①When thinking of losing of the center是when we are thinking of losing of the center的縮寫(xiě)．作為時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)．
②concentrate on sth 專(zhuān)注于…
 2．①Seeing our captains waving his injured finger，we ②made our biggest efforts in the following games．
①現(xiàn)在分詞作為伴隨狀語(yǔ)．
②make efforts 努力
3．I would never forget it ①because I understood the importance of teamwork②for the first time．
①because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
②for the first time第一次

解答 My junior school life is coming to an end．I had a lot of sweet memories．Of them，I'd like to share with you my favorite story about a basketball game．（最喜歡的活動(dòng)籃球比賽）Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams．However，our captain hurt his finger during the third game．He is the brain of our team．When thinking of losing of the center，we were all down and couldn't concentrate on the next match．【高分句型】Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up．With the help of our captain，we played as well as the first two games．Seeing our captains waving his injured finger，we made our biggest efforts in the following games．【高分句型】With the cheers of our students，we won the champion．During the celebrations，we threw our captain into the air（活動(dòng)的過(guò)程）．I would never forget it because I understood the importance of teamwork for the first time．【高分句型】（我的感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表類(lèi)作文寫(xiě)作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．