Question

13．假如你是李華．你在向英國筆友Peter介紹參觀北京科技館的活動．請你用英語寫一封電子郵
件．簡要敘述參觀的過程，以及你的感受．
．提示詞語：the Beijing Science and Technology Museum （in Chaoyang District），take，excited，in?
ventions，scientific exhibitions，experiment
提示問題：●Where is the Bejing Science and Technology Museum？
●Who did you go with？What did you do there？
●How did you feel？
Dear Peter，
How is it going？
I'm writing to tell you my visit to the Bejing Science and Technology Museum．
                                                                 
Yours，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①Although we were very excited②when we saw the museum，we went into the museum in two lines．
雖然當(dāng)我們看見博物館的時候很興奮，但是我們還是排成兩隊進(jìn)去的．
①although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．
②when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時．
【高分句型二】
After we got into it，we saw many new inventions and scientific exhibitions．
當(dāng)我進(jìn)去后，我們看見了很多新發(fā)明和科學(xué)展覽．
after引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，在…之后．

解答 Dear Peter，
How is it going？I'm writing to tell you my visit to the Beijing Science and Technology Museum．The Beijing Science and Technology Museum is in Chaoyang District．（位置）Last Sunday I visited it with my classmates．We started off at six from Pinggu．It took us an hour and a half to get there by bus．Although we were very excited when we saw the museum，we went into the museum in two lines．【高分句型一】After we got into it，we saw many new inventions and scientific exhibitions．【高分句型二】We listened to the teacher there carefully and got a lot from their clear explanation．Then we took some photos and did some experiments．Each of us had a good time．（一起去的人和所做的事情）
On my way back，we still talked about the visit．I felt quite happy and hoped to visit it again in the future．（我的感受）
Yours
Li Hua

點評 寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．