Question

【題目】書面表達（本題有1小題，共15分）

請根據(jù)表格中的信息，談?wù)勀愕拿绹�筆友吉姆以及他的愛好。要求：語句通順，意思連貫，內(nèi)容適當擴充，詞數(shù)80左右。

Name	Jim
Appearance and personality	Tall, active …
Hobby	Surfing the Internet …
Reason	Get lots of information …
How long	For three years …
More information	Send e-mails; chat with others; enjoy music…

I have a pen pal in America. ___________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a penpal from the USA.His name is Jim.He is tall and active.His hobby is surfing the Internet,because he thinks he can get lots of information from the Internet.He also likes sending e-mails to his good friends.He likes chatting with others on the Internet.He enjoys music,too.And He has been in China for three years.He likes China and Chinese people very much.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。要求介紹作者的筆友Jim的一些情況。主要描述的五點內(nèi)容比較清晰，我們要做的就是用適當?shù)木涫�，合適的連詞，把它們表達通順的出來。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色.如His hobby is surfing the Internet,because he thinks he can get lots of information from the Internet.He also likes sending e-mails to his good friends.等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用， 讓文章更出彩。