Question

20．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80-100詞．   
根據(jù)你是林林，你的表弟明明即將開(kāi)始九年級(jí)忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)生活，為幫助他輕松愉快地度過(guò)這一年，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他發(fā)一個(gè)e-mail，內(nèi)容包括以下幾個(gè)方面：
1．生活方面（飲食、睡眠、運(yùn)動(dòng)等）
2．學(xué)習(xí)方面（在學(xué)校、在家里）
3．你對(duì)他的美好祝愿
Dear Mingming，
     I'm glad you'll be a student of Grade 9．You'll have a very busy life．But don't worry．I have some suggestions for you．
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                                                                               Yours，
                                                                               Linlin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．
高分句型：
①You had better get up early every morning and do some exercise to keep healthy．你最好每天早上早起鍛煉身體以保持健康．had better do sth最好做某事，后面跟動(dòng)詞原形；do some exercise 做鍛煉．
②It is very important for you to eat clean and health food，do not eat any dirty things．吃干凈和健康的食物是非常重要的，不要吃任何臟東西．句子中It is important for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是重要的，這里it作形式主語(yǔ)，to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語(yǔ)作真正的主語(yǔ)．

解答 Dear Mingming，
I'm glad you'll be a student of Grade 9．You'll have a very busy life．But don't worry．I have some suggestions for you．（引出話題）
First of all，you should have a good rest after a day's study and sleep on time．You had better get up early every morning and do some exercise to keep healthy（高分句型）．It is very important for you to eat clean and health food，do not eat any dirty things（高分句型）．（生活方面需要注意的事情）Secondly，you should listen to your teachers carefully in class and finish your homework by yourself when you go home．Don't be lazy and you will be a good student．（學(xué)習(xí)方面需要注意的問(wèn)題）Finally，I hope you will have a good time during your study and when you have some questions，I can help you．（美好祝愿）

                                  Yours，
                                      Linlin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．