Question

【題目】 假如你是光明中學(xué)的李霞, 你有一個(gè)好朋友叫韓彤, 她的弟弟叫韓林, 今年他12歲。你有寫(xiě)英文日記的好習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下漢語(yǔ)提示寫(xiě)一篇英文日記, 并表達(dá)自己的看法。上周日上午你去韓彤家?guī)退龑W(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ), 恰巧她的父母不在家, 只有韓彤和她的奶奶、弟弟在家, 到她家時(shí), 你發(fā)現(xiàn):

1. 奶奶感到身體不適, 看起來(lái)很痛苦, 躺在床上, 而她弟弟韓林卻在開(kāi)心玩著電腦游戲

2. 韓彤詢(xún)問(wèn)奶奶病情、測(cè)體溫, 給父母打電話(huà), 并向網(wǎng)上醫(yī)生求助;

3. 奶奶在韓彤幫助下服用合適的藥物之后, 身體狀況好轉(zhuǎn);

4. 你認(rèn)為：……（至少兩點(diǎn)）

參考詞匯：

痛苦的 painful 網(wǎng)上醫(yī)生 online doctor 中華傳統(tǒng)美德 traditional Chinese virtues

要求：

（1）詞數(shù)：80-100個(gè)

（2）日記格式和開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總數(shù)

（3）要點(diǎn)齊全, 行文連貫, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

Sunday

In the morning, I went to Han Tong's home to help her with her English. When I got there, I found________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】例文
Sunday

In the morning, I went to Han Tong's home to help her with her English. When I got there, I found her grandmother felt ill, who looked so quite painful that she had to stay in bed. As far as I know, her brother Han Lin, a 12-year-old boy, is old enough to do many things. However, to my amazement, he was still playing video games happily instead of doing anything to help take care of their grandmother, as if everything around him had nothing to do with him.

On the contrary, Han Tong appeared very calm, and she was trying her best to help her grandmother. At first, Han Tong asked her grandmother for some information about her health and took her temperature. After that, she called her parents to tell them what was happening to her grandmother.

And then she asked the online doctor for some help. Thanks to the doctor’s advice, after grandmother took the right medicine with Lin Tong’s help, she felt better soon.

As we all know, Caring the old is one of traditional Chinese virtues. In my opinion, on the one hand, Han Lin shouldn't play computer games when his grandmother was ill. He should help his sister look after their grandmother as possible as he can. On the other hand, Han Tong did very well. She set a good example for us to follow. All of us should learn from her.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。內(nèi)容是根據(jù)以下漢語(yǔ)提示寫(xiě)一篇英文日記, 并表達(dá)自己的看法。我們可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 奶奶感到身體不適, 看起來(lái)很痛苦, 躺在床上, 而她弟弟韓林卻在開(kāi)心玩著電腦游戲；2. 韓彤詢(xún)問(wèn)奶奶病情、測(cè)體溫, 給父母打電話(huà), 并向網(wǎng)上醫(yī)生求助；3. 奶奶在韓彤幫助下服用合適的藥物之后, 身體狀況好轉(zhuǎn)；4. 你認(rèn)為：……（至少兩點(diǎn)）。