Question

【題目】文段表達（15分）

根據(jù)中文和英文提示．用英文寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的短文。文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

重陽節(jié)（Double Ninth Festival）又稱老人節(jié)，是我國一個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。在那天人們會出游、登高。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下提示，以“重陽敬老”為主題為學(xué)校英語報投稿，介紹人們怎樣慶祝這個節(jié)日，你通常做些什么來敬老助老，以及你的想法。

提示詞語：go outing，climb，help，look after

1. How do Chinese people celebrate Double Ninth Festival?

2. What do you usually do to show respect to the old?

3. Do you think it is important to respect the old? Why?

Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese Festival

Answer 1

【答案】

Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese Festival. On that day, people usually climb mountains and go outing with their family. It’s also a day to show respect to the old.

As a teenager, I try my best to do what I can to be nice to the old. I often visit my grandparents on weekends and talk to them and cheer them up. I also help them with the housework. Meanwhile, I am polite to the old. When I see them on the bus, I always offer them my seat. Moreover, I volunteer to look after the old who live alone in our neighborhood. I help them carry heavy things when they need help.

I think it’s very important to respect the old because they have done a lot to their family and to the country. One day, we will all be old.

【解析】

試題分析：本話題作文要求以“重陽敬老”為主題，介紹重陽節(jié)。根據(jù)要求，短文要從“人們怎樣慶祝這個節(jié)日”、“通常做些什么來敬老助老”、“自己的想法”三個方面展開寫作。學(xué)生需要在三個要點的內(nèi)容展開上，分配得當(dāng)，即第二點要詳寫（給出的提示詞可以幫助學(xué)生第二點內(nèi)容的展開），其余兩點相對略寫。另外，要注意段落間的有效銜接、文章主題時態(tài)的正確使用（一般現(xiàn)在時）及詞匯句式的豐富多樣。

寫作亮點：短文層次清楚，詳略得當(dāng)。第一段簡介重陽節(jié)；第二段詳細介紹自己怎樣敬老助老，具體生動，中心突出；第三段闡述了敬老的意義，主旨鮮明。第一段中不定式作定語，第二段里的try one's best to do、volunteer to do等結(jié)構(gòu)及時間狀語從句，第三段里的不定式作主語，原因狀語從句等等語法結(jié)構(gòu)，都為本文增色不少。