Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共15分）

寫作：假如你是Simon，你想推薦你班同學(xué)Sandy為本學(xué)期最佳學(xué)生獎(the Best Student Award)得主，請根據(jù)下列要點寫一封推薦信(不少于70個詞)：

1. 聰明，學(xué)東西快，各門功課學(xué)得很好。對中國歷史了解很多。

2. 考慮問題細(xì)致，計劃周全，是“助人為樂俱樂部”的一員，參與各種活動，如：經(jīng)常在車上給老人讓座，為貧窮地區(qū)的孩子們捐款。

3. 擅長運動擅長打籃球，是�；@球隊的成員, 有時教新成員打籃球。

4. 對人友好，樂于助人，我們都喜歡他。

Dear Sir/Madam

I’d like to

Yours faithfully

Simon

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I’d like to recommend Sandy to be the Best Student Award. The reasons are the follows.

Sandy is very clever and she learns things quickly. She studies all her subjects well. Besides, she knows a lot about Chinese history. She thinks a lot and plans well before she does things. She is a member of Help Others Club and she joins many activities. For example, she often makes room for the old on the bus. She also donates money for children in poor areas.

She is good at playing basketball and she is on our school basketball team. Sometimes she teaches new members to play basketball. She is friendly to others and is always ready to help others. We all like her.

Yours faithfully,

Simon

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以Simon的身份給學(xué)校寫一封推薦信，推薦Sandy為本學(xué)期最佳學(xué)生獎。我們要在信中說明推薦Sandy的原因，題目中給出了我們具體的寫作提綱，我們需要用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，注意語句通順，符合英語的表達(dá)規(guī)范，內(nèi)容全面，不要遺漏要點。通過分析可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱單數(shù)she來表達(dá)，因此我們要特別注意句中謂語動詞的形式，都要用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。另外，我們還需要注意表達(dá)的連貫和流暢，多使用我們學(xué)過的句型和短語，還有一些連詞，可以使短文意思更連貫。

寫作亮點：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，短文中作者按照題目要求完成了一封推薦信。短文的意思非常完整，語句也很通順，表達(dá)也比較流暢。首先作者先點明了寫信的目的，I’d like to recommend Sandy to be the Best Student Award，一句話帶過，意思非常簡潔，但是也達(dá)到了目的。短文的中心集中在表述推薦Sandy的原因上，作者分成了兩段來表達(dá)。這一部分是短文的重點內(nèi)容，作者按照題目列出的提綱進(jìn)行了翻譯，但是同時也注意使用了一些連詞，將一些語句連接，使文章語意連貫。這一部分中使用的比較好的句型有：Besides, she knows a lot about Chinese history.、She is a member of Help Others Club and she joins many activities、She is good at playing basketball and she is on our school basketball team、She is friendly to others and is always ready to help others等。