Question

6．根據(jù)圖片寫一篇80字短文．

One morning，as Lihua was walking on the way to school，he threw a banana skin on the road．After a while，a little boy stepped on the skin and fell down．So he began to cry．At this time，a girl passed here．When she saw the boy，she lifted him up．Lihua felt sorry，and he thought it wrong to throw the skin here and there．At last，he picked up the skin and threw it into the dustbin．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是用根據(jù)圖畫敘述一個(gè)上學(xué)路上發(fā)生的故事．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
描述圖畫；李華上學(xué)途中扔了香蕉皮在路上，小男孩踩到摔跤了，一個(gè)女孩扶起來小男孩，李華很后悔，撿起香蕉皮扔垃圾桶了
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
on the way to+地點(diǎn) 去某地的路上
fall down 摔倒
begin to do sth 開始做某事
at last 最后
pick up 撿起
【高分句型】
1．One morning，①as Lihua was walking ②on the way to school，he threw a banana skin on the road．
①as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
②on the way to+地點(diǎn) 去某地的路上
2．①When she saw the boy，she ②lifted him up．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句
②lift up 扶起
3．Lihua felt sorry，and he thought①it wrong to throw the skin②here and there．
①it是形式賓語，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正賓語，構(gòu)成think it+adji+to do sth 認(rèn)為做某事是怎樣的
②here and there四處

解答 One morning，as Lihua was walking on the way to school，he threw a banana skin on the road．【高分句型】（第一幅圖）After a while，a little boy stepped on the skin and fell down．（第二幅圖）So he began to cry．At this time，a girl passed here．When she saw the boy，she lifted him up．【高分句型】Lihua felt sorry，and he thought it wrong to throw the skin here and there．【高分句型】（第三幅圖）At last，he picked up the skin and threw it into the dustbin．（第四幅圖）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給圖畫作文，根據(jù)圖畫敘述一個(gè)故事．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：as Lihua was…； a little boy stepped…； When she saw…及he thought it…等句式的應(yīng)用．寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用．寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練．開頭介紹了李華在上學(xué)路上扔了一個(gè)香蕉皮，接下來介紹一個(gè)小男孩踩上了香蕉皮，一個(gè)女孩把他扶起來，最后李華感到抱歉，把香蕉皮扔進(jìn)了垃圾箱里．此處用了on the way to，stepped on，lifted him up．及picked up 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少．