Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（本題有1 小題，共10分)

作為一個(gè)中學(xué)生, 你覺(jué)得努力學(xué)習(xí)取得好成績(jī)的同時(shí)應(yīng)該幫忙做家務(wù)嗎？請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕目捶ā＃ㄗ謹(jǐn)?shù)80詞左右）

As a middle school student, should we help out with chores at home?

Answer 1

【答案】

As a middle school student, should we help out with chores at home? Some people think students needn’t do any housework.They think the only thing students need do is to study well. I don’t think so. I think it is good for students to do some housework for three reasons.

Firstly,to do some housework can make you independent. You can’t depend on others all your life.So,you should learn to do some housework now.

Secondly, to do some housework can keep you healthy and strong ,some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise.

Finally, to do some housework can share your parents’ work .They must be happy if you say” Have a rest ,and I will do the housework”

So I think it is good for students to do some housework

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如So I think it is good for students to do some housework等，Finally等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。