Question

【題目】近年來(lái)校園安全問(wèn)題越來(lái)越引起人們的關(guān)注，建設(shè)平安校園是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任與義務(wù)。作為一名學(xué)生，我們不僅要注意自己的人身安全，更應(yīng)該珍惜自己和他人的生命。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格，就安全問(wèn)題寫一封約90詞的演講稿，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā?/span>

現(xiàn)狀		最近發(fā)生兩起安全事故
建 議	人身安全	刀具類危險(xiǎn)品不允許帶到學(xué)校 課間不相互追逐打架
	心理安全	學(xué)習(xí)壓力過(guò)大時(shí)通過(guò)聽音樂(lè)等方式放松
	你的意見(jiàn)	校園安全還需要注意什么？請(qǐng)自擬至少兩點(diǎn)。

注意事項(xiàng):

1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾部分已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；

3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

Hello, teachers and schoolmates. It’s my honour to be here and talk about how to keep safe at school.__________________________________________________________________________

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That’s all for my speech. Thanks a lot.

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, teachers and schoolmates. It’s my honor to be here and talk about how to keep safe at school.

As we know, two safety accidents have happened around us recently. We should pay attention to our own safety. Carrying something dangerous, like knives, is not allowed in school. After class, we shouldn’t run after or fight with each other.

Sometimes we may feel stressed. Listening to music and doing some sports will make it easier for us to relax ourselves.

When we are in trouble, we can always ask our teachers for help. Moreover, posters can be put up to help students know more about how to keep safe at school.

That’s all for my speech. Thanks a lot.

【解析】這是一篇材料作文。所給材料比較詳細(xì)，提示條理清晰，我們要做的就是用英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn): 這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上注意使用多種句式，同時(shí)還使用了表示次序的連接詞，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。此外，一些常用短語(yǔ)如：talk about, pay attention to, run after, be in trouble, put up等的使用，為文章增色不少。