Question

【題目】文段表達(dá)（共10分）

假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Tom要來北京和你一起過寒假。請你寫信告訴他北京的天氣情況、你通常在假期都做什么以及你的感受。（圖片信息僅供參考）

要求：50個(gè)詞左右。

Dear Tom，

I am glad that you will come to Beijing!

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Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom，

I’m glad that you will come to Beijing!

Beijing is a modern and beautiful city. It’s cold and windy in winter，so you had better wear your warm coats.

I like playing basketball with my good friends in the morning during winter vacation. That helps me full of energy. In the afternoon I often play chess or watch TV to relax. I usually do my homework and read books in the evening. I love winter vacation because I have time to relax.

I can’t wait to meet you in Beijing.

Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文通過圖片給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文用準(zhǔn)確的語句表達(dá)了圖片中的每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，格式正確，段落清晰。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.