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【題目】 上高中后第一節(jié)英語(yǔ)課， 老師要求每個(gè)同學(xué)用英語(yǔ)做一分鐘的自我介紹。 請(qǐng)準(zhǔn)備一份80-100 詞的發(fā)言稿， 內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及以下四個(gè)方面：

1. 家庭情況 2. 學(xué)習(xí)上的強(qiáng)項(xiàng)與弱項(xiàng)

3. 興趣與愛(ài)好 4. 對(duì)高中生活的期待

要求：1. 內(nèi)容反映自己的真實(shí)情況，但不得在文中提及真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名；

2. 首尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Hello, every body,

Nice to meet you. My name is Li Huan. I’m from Rainbow High School.

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Thank you!

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One possible version

Hello, every body,

Nice to meet you. My name is Li Huan. I’m from Rainbow High School. Both my parents are working far away from home, so I spent most of my childhood with my grandparents. I seldom see my parents, but they love me and I understand them. We talked a lot on the phone. At school I am good at math, physics and chemistry, but I find English and Chinese rather challenging. I love small animals, Back at home we have three cats. Every time I go home, they rush out to greet me. In this new school , I am going to work together with my new teachers and new classmates to make new progress in my study, especially in my English and Chinese.

Thank you !

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫，當(dāng)然描寫對(duì)高中生活的期待要用到be going to結(jié)構(gòu)。要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用連接詞and、and，but等連詞以及頻度副詞，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。