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2．現(xiàn)在養(yǎng)寵物狗已成為很多人生活中的一部分，請你寫一篇短文談一談對養(yǎng)寵物狗的看法，內(nèi)容須含利弊兩方面．
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1．養(yǎng)寵物狗可給人帶來快樂，消減孤獨與煩惱，陪伴并幫助家人解決一些困難等．
2．養(yǎng)寵物狗會占用很多時間．寵物狗有一定危險性，有時會傷害孩子．另外，它會給家人和鄰居帶來噪音，污染周圍環(huán)境等．
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How Do You Like Pet Dogs？
Every morning，we can see many kinds of pet dogs led by the persons who walk around．Pet dogs have become a part of their lives．I thinkkeeping pets brings joy to our life．Actually，it is good to keep pets because pets canplaywith the young and accompany the old．Research also shows that living with a pet helps to relieve people's pressure and distress and even decreases the possibility of getting heart diseases．
However，many are against living together with animals．They argue that pets are easily infected by diseases，whichmaypass on to humans．
What's more，the unpleasant smell and waste caused by pets are a resource of environmental pollution．
So we avoid potential risks and troubles，we have to makesurethat ourpetsare properly vaccinated and their behaviors are under control．．

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分析 本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文，談?wù)摿岁P(guān)于養(yǎng)寵物的問題，首先要把兩方的觀點說清楚，其次要求自己發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容較多，要注意適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行描述，還要注意人稱的轉(zhuǎn)換及連詞的使用．

解答 How Do You Like Pet Dogs？
    Every morning，we can see many kinds of pet dogs led by the persons who walk around．Pet dogs have become a part of their lives．I think keeping pets brings joy to our life．
    Actually，it is good to keep pets because pets can play with the young and accompany the old．Research also shows that living with a pet helps to relieve people's pressure and distress and even decreases the possibility of getting heart diseases．
    However，many are against living together with animals．They argue that pets are easily infected by diseases，which may pass on to humans．What's more，the unpleasant smell and waste caused by pets are a resource of environmental pollution．
    So we avoid potential risks and troubles，we have to make sure that our pets are properly vaccinated and their behaviors are under control．

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文，要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點和細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時，要注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．