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【題目】寫作

我校為了激發(fā)中學(xué)生的英語學(xué)習(xí)熱情，提高學(xué)習(xí)英語的能力，舉辦了題為“My dream home” 的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表中所給信息，完成演講稿。

房子的格局	1. 有3層，可以和家人住一起； 2. 前有一個(gè)漂亮的花園, 后有一個(gè)足球場(chǎng)； 3. 一層有廚房，經(jīng)常和家人坐在那里喝茶、吃零食； 4. 二層至少有3個(gè)臥室；我有自己的臥室，不必與姐妹共享； 5. 三層有陽臺(tái)，可以在那享受與朋友聊天的樂趣；
房子的周邊	1. 有個(gè)購物中心，可以買到各種時(shí)尚的衣服、不同風(fēng)格的禮物； 2. 離我家不遠(yuǎn)處有家電影院，可以邀請(qǐng)朋友周末時(shí)看電影； 3. 在我家旁有家快餐店，干凈又舒服；
其他	…(補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 所寫短文必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，省略處適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使短文通順流暢。

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。

Ladies and Gentlemen,

I would like to tell you about my dream home._________________________________

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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

Ladies and Gentlemen,

I would like to tell you about my dream home. It has three floors. I can live with my family. There is a beautiful garden in front of it, and behind it is a football field. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, my family and I often sit there drinking tea, eating snacks. The second floor has at least three bedrooms. I have my own bedroom, so I needn't share with my sisters. On the third floor there is a big balcony, I can enjoy the pleasure of chatting with my friends there.

There is a shopping center around our house; there you can buy all kinds of fashion clothes, different styles of gifts.

Not far from my house is a cinema, I can invite my friends to see the movies on the weekend. Beside my house is a fast-food restaurant, it’s clean and comfortable. I can enjoy delicious food there.

I think it is very comfortable to live in my dream home. That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，以題為“My dream home” 的演講比賽為主題，根據(jù)以下表中所給信息，完成演講稿。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來描述自己夢(mèng)想中的家。人稱為第三人稱。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式。如there be結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。提示的幾個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)面面俱到。表達(dá)的非常完整。文中以不同的句式來表達(dá)某處有某物，There is a beautiful garden in front of it, and behind it is a football field. The second floor has at least three bedrooms.可見小作者的英語基礎(chǔ)非常扎實(shí)。最后暢想自己家和感受：I think it is very comfortable to live in my dream home.