Question

7．根據(jù)要求完成小作文，詞數(shù)：30左右，不超過40．
現(xiàn)今人們越來越關(guān)注健康，也越來越關(guān)注鍛煉方式．那么，怎樣才能強身健體呢？
請以 How to be stronger？為題寫一篇小作文．How to be stronger
Everybody has only one life，so we should take good care of ourselves．To be stronger，we should exercise properly．And we should have good eating habits．When we are tired，we should know how to relax in a healthy way．If you work hard enough，you will find your own way．．

Answer 1

分析 動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．題中包含了這些要點：①現(xiàn)今人們越來越關(guān)注健康，也越來越關(guān)注鍛煉方式；②怎樣才能強身健體呢．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．
高分句型一
When we are tired，we should know how to relax in a healthy way當(dāng)我們累了，我們應(yīng)該知道如何以健康的方式放松．這是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
高分句型二
If you work hard enough，you will find your own way如果你足夠努力，你會找到你自己的路．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．注意主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．

解答 How to be stronger
Everybody has only one life，so we should take good care of ourselves【要點一】．To be stronger，we should exercise properly．And we should have good eating habits．When we are tired，we should know how to relax in a healthy way【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．If you work hard enough，you will find your own way【高分句型二，注意狀語從句的使用】【要點二】．

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