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【題目】書面表達(dá)（15分）

眼睛是身體的重要組成部分。我們每天用眼睛讀書，用眼睛來看這美麗的世界�？墒怯捎诜敝氐膶W(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)，很多中學(xué)生都出現(xiàn)了眼睛方面的問題。因此，保護(hù)視力十分重要。有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為保證充足的睡眠、學(xué)習(xí)期間讓眼睛有規(guī)律的放松、使用正確的方法讀書寫字都可以保護(hù)視力。請(qǐng)你以作為中學(xué)生“如何保護(hù)視力（eyesight）”為話題，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

1．請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息材料和話題（不要逐句翻譯），寫出結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、內(nèi)容完整、語言豐富優(yōu)美、語法準(zhǔn)確、可讀性強(qiáng)的短文。

2．至少 80 詞。

3．不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名和學(xué)校名。

4 ．題目自擬。

Answer 1

【答案】

How to prctect our eyesight

Eye is an important part of our body. We can’t read ,look at the beautiful word without our eyes. but It is reported that many middle school studdents in China have eyesight(視力) trouble beacause of the heavy schoolwork. So it is important to prctect our eyesight. More and more parents hope to improve their children's eyesight with medicine, or by correcting the ways that children read and sit. And we students also have some ideas.

Some students thinks that we should have enough sleep time . and we should make the eyes relax during learning. We must use correct ways to read and write.

I think besides those,it is good to do some exercise. When we exercise we aslo exercise our eyes.like rope skipping(跳繩).It can also be good for one's eyesight. While skipping rope, one has to move quickly, making both the brain and the eyes excited. It may also help make one grow taller. Another thing is important that we mustn’t watch too much TV or play too much computer games. They are bad for our eyes.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料的話題作文作文。要求介紹任何保護(hù)視力。主要從兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作，一個(gè)是同學(xué)們對(duì)保護(hù)視力的看法和建議，另一個(gè)方面是作者對(duì)怎樣保護(hù)視力的意見。主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，在寫作中主要提建議的情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的應(yīng)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作，一個(gè)是保護(hù)視力的重要性，另一個(gè)是同學(xué)們對(duì)保護(hù)視力的建議，最后是作者對(duì)保護(hù)視力提供的方法。這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。