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8．"安全，是最大的幸福"．作為一名中學生，我們應該學會自我保護，遠離危險，減少傷害．請你從以下要點提示中選取至少四條，以"Always Be Careful"為題，寫一篇80字左右的英語短文．文章開頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總字數(shù)．
要點提示：
1．遵守交通規(guī)則（不闖紅燈、過馬路不聽音樂）；
2．戶外運動發(fā)生意外時會急救；
3．下大雨時不要站在高處，遠離大樹；
4．如遇火災、要冷靜（打119、用濕布蓋住嘴巴、不要乘坐電梯）；
5．不要獨自下河游泳（發(fā)現(xiàn)有人溺水，要求救）；
6．其它方面（飲食、上網(wǎng)、交友安全…）
參考詞匯：布cloth （n．）、急救first aid、溺水drown （v．）
Always Be Careful
As a middle school student，we should learn self-protection and stay away danger．Once we are in the street，traffic rules should be obeyed all the time．For example，never listen to music while riding a bike．Besides always follow the traffic lights．
If someone happens to get hurt，learn to get first aid quickly．When it rains，Don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．If we are indoors when the fire is on，we should be calm．At the same time，we can call 119 and cover our mouths with wet cloth．Be sure not to take a lift．Don't go swimming by ourselves．If someone is drowning，call for help．And we should also pay more attention to our food and Internet safety．If all these are kept in mind，we are sure to enjoy a much safer life．

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)題干可知：這是一篇提綱作文．主要寫中學生應該注意安全的話題．
寫作要點：1．遵守交通規(guī)則（不闖紅燈、過馬路不聽音樂）；2．下大雨時不要站在高處，遠離大樹；
3．如遇火災、要冷靜（打119、用濕布蓋住嘴巴、不要乘坐電梯）；
4．不要獨自下河游泳（發(fā)現(xiàn)有人溺水，要求救）；
5．其它方面（飲食、上網(wǎng)安全…）
人稱：第一人稱為主；
時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主；
主要短語和句型：stay away from，遠離…；
traffic rules，交通規(guī)則；
keep away from，遠離…；
cover…with…，用…蓋住…；
take a lift，乘電梯；
pay attention to，注意…；
be sure to，一定會．
高分句型：
1．If someone happens to get hurt，learn to get first aid quickly．
如果有人碰巧受傷，學會迅速急救．
if引導的條件狀語從句，if，在此處意為"如果"，要遵循"主將從現(xiàn)原則"．
2．When it rains，don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．
When引導的條件狀語從句，When在此處意為"當…時候"．
don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．否定祈使句．
3．And we should also pay more attention to our food and Internet safety．
情態(tài)動詞的用法．情態(tài)動詞should+動詞原形．表示應該做某事．pay attention to 注意…

解答 參考答案：
As a middle school student，we should learn self-protection and stay away from danger．
   Once we are in the street，traffic rules should be obeyed all the time．For example，never listen to music while riding a bike．Besides always follow the traffic lights．（注意交通安全）
【高分句型1】If someone happens to get hurt，learn to get first aid quickly．【高分句型2】When it rains，don't stay on a high place and keep away from the big trees．（注意雨天安全）If we are indoors when the fire is on，we should be calm．At the same time，we can call 119 and cover our mouths with wet cloth．Be sure not to take a lift．（遇到火災的情況）Don't go swimming by ourselves．If someone is drowning，call for help．（遇到溺水的情況）【高分句型3】And we should also pay more attention to our food and Internet safety．（飲食、上網(wǎng)安全）
   If all these are kept in mind，we are sure to enjoy a much safer life．

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