Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是我們學(xué)校一個(gè)叫約翰的學(xué)生,上周我們學(xué)校舉行了風(fēng)箏節(jié)（Kite Festival）,請(qǐng)用英語寫一封電子郵件把你的經(jīng)歷告訴你的筆友Edward。詞數(shù)80詞左右。開頭已給,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示 1.上周我們?cè)邳S山湖公園（the Huangshan Lake Park）舉行了風(fēng)箏節(jié)。

2.我們花了一小時(shí)徒步走到公園。進(jìn)入公園后,我們朝沙灘走去。

3.抬頭一看,看到有很多風(fēng)箏在天上飛。我們從書包里拿出了風(fēng)箏。

4.一些同學(xué)在湖邊放風(fēng)箏,另一些在樹下搭起了帳篷。

5. 我們還享受了很多美食。我們……

注意：第五點(diǎn)必須要用2-3句展開合理想象,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Dear Edward,

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All the best

John

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Edward,

Last week, we held a Kite Festival in the Huangshan Lake Park. It took us an hour to walk to the park. After entering the park, we walked towards the beach. We looked up and saw many kites flying in the sky. We took the kites out of our schoolbags. Some students flew kites near the lake, and others put up tents under the tree. We also enjoyed lots of delicious food. We found it interesting to fly kites. We had a good time there. We think it is wonderful.

All the best

John

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文叫小作者用英語寫一封電子郵件把你的經(jīng)歷告訴你的筆友Edward。在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如We looked up and saw many kites flying in the sky. We took the kites out of our schoolbags. Some students flew kites near the lake, and others put up tents under the tree. We also enjoyed lots of delicious food. We found it interesting to fly kites.等等。