Question

3．現(xiàn)在，有的同學(xué)不吃早飯就去上學(xué)． 請針對這種現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文．內(nèi)容包括：
   1．學(xué)生不吃早飯的原因；
   2．不吃早飯對學(xué)生的影響（至少兩個方面）；
   3．你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何合理安排早餐？
   要求：1．字?jǐn)?shù)：80-100字．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
         2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與大名．
   Some of us go to school without having breakfast．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題類作文，由于題干給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡潔，所以需要對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展．題目中的要點(diǎn)都要提到，缺一不可．首先分析學(xué)生不吃早飯的原因，然后講述不吃早飯對學(xué)生的影響，最后給出合理早餐的建議．文章用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)敘述，用第一人稱．用表示建議的句子表達(dá)自己的看法，如：You'd better…/It's better…等等．

解答 參考范文：
Some of us go to school without having breakfast．We stay up late to study．We prefer sleeping a little longer to getting up early．So we don't have enough time for breakfast．In the morning we usually have four classes．It's a long time before lunch．If we don't have breakfast，we may feel hungry in class and won't concentrate on our study．What's more，it's bad for our health．
From now on，we'd better get up a little earlier，and have noodles for breakfast．It's also good to have bread，milk and eggs．It's better to have some fruit after breakfast．
Let's have breakfast every day．

點(diǎn)評 本文屬于話題類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．