Question

今年4月14日青海省玉樹縣發(fā)生了7.1級的地震，請你寫一封慰問信給玉樹縣的中學生，談談你能為他們做些什么，并鼓勵他們堅強、相信新校園、新家園會有的。
要求：90詞左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。
Dear friends，
                                                                                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  

Answer 1

Dear friends，
I’m sorry to hear that there was a strong earthquake in Yushu, Qinghai province(your hometown).I watch TV every day and care about the news from Yushu. We are so sad that most of us cried .We decided to raise money for charity to help homeless people. Everyone in our class takes out all our pocket money. Secondly, we should buy books for students in Yushu. Thirdly, we want to be volunteers to help them out. We feel good about doing something for you.
As a middle school student, we must be brave and study hard. We should learn from the PLA men . I’m sure ,with the help of all Chinese , You’ll have new schools and new houses soon Let’s work hard together !
Yours sincerely,
Nancy

試題分析：這是一封寫給玉樹災區(qū)的信，首先要用正確的格式去寫，會用一些短語，了解英語的句子結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語的不同，需要平時對課本上的課文要正確地理解，會仿照課文的句子寫出正確的英語句子，信的開頭要表示悲痛的心情，談談能為他們做些什么，并鼓勵他們堅強、相信新校園、新家園會有的。注意用一般現(xiàn)在時，用第一人稱來敘述。
【亮點說明】短文用了一些短語和固定句式，為文章增色不少，如：I’m sorry to hear that，等，為了上下文的銜接還用了一些過渡詞如：Secondly, Thirdly,等。