Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共10處 語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

I will never forget a military training in California Summer Camp that August. The big sun was overhead, burned hot. The drillmaster was very strict and we were all afraid of him. If one of us made a mistake, all of us will get such punishment delaying a meal, standing for 10 minutes or whatever. Therefore, after training, it was no doubt that our drillmaster was energetic and agreeable. His strong local accent kept us laugh madly. More interesting, he sang out of tune, from beginning to end. Every time when he sang, we could help laughing to tears.

Answer 1

【答案】1. a---the 2. burned---burning; 3. will---would; 4. punishment后加as;5. Therefore---However; 6. it ---there; 7. laugh---laughing; 8. interesting---interestingly;9. 刪除when; 10. could---couldn't/或加not

【解析】文章作者回憶了在加利福尼亞夏令營的軍訓活動和其中的趣事。

1. a---the.考查冠詞。此處特指在加利福尼亞夏令營的軍訓，表示特指用定冠詞the，故a---the.

2. burned---burning.考查非謂語動詞。句中burn的主語和句子的主語一致，都是The big sun，兩者是主動關系，此處作狀語用-ing形式，故burned---burning.

3. will---would.考查動詞時態(tài)。句中從句用過去時，根據(jù)句意主句也用過去時態(tài)的某種形式，此處用過去將來時，故will---would.

4. punishment后加as.考查介詞。此處指我們將受到諸如晚吃飯，罰站10分鐘等懲罰。表示“如同，諸如”，故punishment后加as.

5.Therefore---However.考查副詞。上句說我們犯錯后教官會懲罰我們，下句講訓練之后教官又會精力充沛。前后句不是因果關系，是轉(zhuǎn)折。故Therefore---However.

6. it ---there.考查固定句型。此處是there is no doubt that…句型，表示“毫無疑問…”，其中there be表示“有”，故it ---there.

7. laugh---laughing.考查動詞形式。keep sb. doing sth.讓某人總是做某事，此處指教官濃重的當?shù)乜谝艨偸亲屛覀儼l(fā)笑，故laugh---laughing.

8. interesting---interestingly.考查副詞。此處單獨用，在句中作狀語用副詞。故interesting---interestingly.

9. 刪除when.考查連詞。句中Every time表示“每次”，表時間。When也是表時間，兩者重復。故刪除when.

10. could---couldn't/或加not.考查情態(tài)動詞。此處表示“禁不住做某事”，用can’t/couldn’t help doing，情態(tài)動詞用否定形式，故could---couldn't/或加not.