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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)，上周一班會(huì)課我們班就“我的夢(mèng)想”進(jìn)行了一次熱烈的討論。

Simon率先發(fā)言：

1．想寫(xiě)自己的故事，在將來(lái)當(dāng)一位作家：

2．最喜歡小說(shuō)，每周花四個(gè)多小時(shí)閱讀；

3．對(duì)各種各樣的書(shū)都感興趣，每次看后都會(huì)寫(xiě)讀書(shū)報(bào)告；

4．好書(shū)是好朋友，可以增長(zhǎng)我們的知識(shí)、幫助我們放松身心，也給我們打開(kāi)一個(gè)新的世界。會(huì)努力實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。

5．你的夢(mèng)想是……

要求：1．要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使句子通順、連貫。

2．最后一點(diǎn)要展開(kāi)合理的想象，不少于2點(diǎn)。

3．詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My dream

Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful and someone m ay want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here is Simon's dream.

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When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.

Answer 1

【答案】

My dream

Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful and someone may want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here is Simon's dream.

Simon wants to write his own stories and become a writer in the future. He likes novels best. He spends over four hours a week reading. He is interested in different types of books and he will write book reports after reading every time. Good books are good friends. They can improve our knowledge and help us relax. They also open up a whole new world to us. He will work hard to realize his dream.My dream is to study abroad one day. I really want to make more friends and learn more about the world.

When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.

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