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【題目】書面表達，上周一班會課我們班就“我的夢想”進行了一次熱烈的討論。

Simon率先發(fā)言：

1．想寫自己的故事，在將來當一位作家：

2．最喜歡小說，每周花四個多小時閱讀；

3．對各種各樣的書都感興趣，每次看后都會寫讀書報告；

4．好書是好朋友，可以增長我們的知識、幫助我們放松身心，也給我們打開一個新的世界。會努力實現(xiàn)夢想。

5．你的夢想是……

要求：1．要點齊全，可適當增加細節(jié)使句子通順、連貫。

2．最后一點要展開合理的想象，不少于2點。

3．詞數(shù)90左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My dream

Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful and someone m ay want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here is Simon's dream.

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When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.

Answer 1

【答案】

My dream

Everyone may have his own dream. Someone may want to be rich, someone may want to be beautiful and someone may want to have power. Last Monday, we had a warm discussion about this topic at the class meeting. Here is Simon's dream.

Simon wants to write his own stories and become a writer in the future. He likes novels best. He spends over four hours a week reading. He is interested in different types of books and he will write book reports after reading every time. Good books are good friends. They can improve our knowledge and help us relax. They also open up a whole new world to us. He will work hard to realize his dream.My dream is to study abroad one day. I really want to make more friends and learn more about the world.

When thinking of these things, we realize that we are full of life and hope.

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