Question

【題目】書面表達。

My dream job

提示：將來想從事的工作是什么；為什么要從事這項工作；為了實現(xiàn)這一理想，你將怎么做。要求語言通順流暢，可適當發(fā)揮，不少于80詞。

My dream job

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream job

Everybody has his dream job. I also have my dream job. My dream is to work for foreign tourists as a tour guide.

Why do I want to be a tour guide? First of all, I'm an outgoing girl, and I like doing some exciting things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends all over the world. This may be great. What’s more, I like singing. Singing English songs is my favorite. I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists. Their trip will be excellent.

Now, I am still a middle school student. My job now is to work hard in school. Then I’ll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide. I’m sure I can be a good tour guide in the future

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己將來的工作，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends all over the world.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。