Question

【題目】書面表達。（滿分10分）

假如你是林濤，想和Julia交筆友。請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，給她發(fā)封電子郵件介紹一下自己的情況。要求：字跡工整、規(guī)范，60詞左右。可適當發(fā)揮。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

Name	Lin Tao
Age	13
Look	tall, round face, big nose, big eyes, small mouth
Job	student
School	No.7 Junior High School, Beijing
Favorite animals and food	cats, dogs, rice, chicken

Dear Julia,

My name is Lin Tao. I want to make penfriends with you.

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Do you like to be my pen pal?

Yours,

Lin Tao

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Julia,

My name is Lin Tao. I want to make penfriends with you. I’m 13 years old. I’m tall and I have a round face, a big nose, big eyes and a small mouth. I’m a student. I study in No.7 Junior High School, Beijing. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. I like animals very much. My favorite animals are dogs and cats. My favorite food is rice and chicken.

Do you like to be my pen pal?

Yours,

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，林濤給Julia發(fā)的一封電子郵件介紹自己的情況，并想和她交筆友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My name is…，I’m ....； I like....以及My favorite animals are.....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，完整的表達出表格中所列內(nèi)容。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭林濤介紹了寫信的目的，想和Julia交筆友，接下來介紹自己的長相和所在班級，最后介紹自己的。此處want to do sth, make penfriends, like to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。