Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（本大題共10分）

現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)文學(xué)非常受青少年歡迎，但良莠不齊，作為青少年，請(qǐng)談?wù)勀銓?duì)此的看法。

要點(diǎn)：1.越來(lái)越多的青少年熱衷于網(wǎng)上閱讀。

2.他們通�；ê芏鄷r(shí)間在網(wǎng)上閱讀，結(jié)果不能按時(shí)交作業(yè)，課上還常打瞌睡。

3.好書有益我們的身心，但是網(wǎng)上許多書不適合青少年，會(huì)影響(influence)我們的健康。

4.你建議....

Now, online books are very popular among young people

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Answer 1

【答案】

More and more teenagers are crazy about reading online.They usually spend much time on it.As a result,they can't hand in their homework on time.They often feel sleepy in class,too.God books are good for our mind and body.But many books on the Internet are not suitable for teenagers.They will influence our health.I advise teenagers should learn how to choose good books to read.They should achieve a balance between their schoolwork and reading online.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。要求介紹青少年對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)文學(xué)的看法。主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文要點(diǎn)全,句式應(yīng)用較多例如But many books on the Internet are not suitable for teenagers.They will influence our health.I advise teenagers should learn how to choose good books to read.They should achieve a balance between their schoolwork and reading online.等。使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。