Question

10．優(yōu)美的城市需要優(yōu)秀的市民 （citizen），你的行為影響著城市的形象．請(qǐng)你參考下面調(diào)查表中的內(nèi)容，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示和寫(xiě)作要求，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勅绾巫鲆粋�(gè)好市民．

Good Behavior In Public		Always	Sometimes	Never
				A	B	C
①	wait for your turn in line
②	be polite to others
③	give your seat to the old
④	care for the environment
⑤	follow rules and obey signs
⑥	volunteer your time to help others
Mostly A：You're the perfect citizen!Keep it up!
Mostly B：Not bad，but think how you can become a better citizen．
Mostly C：Oh no!You need to think about other people more!

要點(diǎn)提示：①why it's important to be a good citizen
②ways to be a good citizen
寫(xiě)作要求：①調(diào)查表僅供參考，不必填寫(xiě)；
②短文無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；
③詞數(shù)不得少于80；
④文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we should volunteer to help people in trouble我們應(yīng)該志愿去幫助處于困難的人．
介詞短語(yǔ)做為后置定語(yǔ)，修飾people．
【高分句型二】
If you can try your best，and think about other people more，you will be a better citizen．如果你能盡力，更多的考慮他人，你就會(huì)是一個(gè)更好的市民．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 We won't have a great city without great citizens．Is your city better or worse because of your behavior？（為什么）As a student，what should we do to be good citizens？
Firstly，we should follow rules and obey signs in public，such as waiting in line and no littering around．Secondly，we are supposed to be polite to others，for example，give our seats to the old．Thirdly，we should volunteer to help people in trouble．【高分句型一】
There are many ways to be a good citizen．If you can try your best，and think about other people more，you will be a better citizen．【高分句型二】（方式）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作要抓住要點(diǎn)．要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，這樣在寫(xiě)作時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．